Essai sur l'obésité en anglais
Obesity is such a plague that the expression « world epidemic » is often used to qualify it. This idiom, even if it is quiet wrong, implied that obesity touches more Voc/o = quite tps = présent and more people over the world.
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States are all the more worried about this expansion because of the risks inhere in obesity. Indeed, outcomes of obesity are really bad, both for individuals
1 adj = inherent to and for States. For individuals because it sparks off a lot of health problems p (utilisez des tirets ici) like diabetes. For States because these latter implied huge cost for them, to p guarantee there treatments, notably in the name of x right to live. Then, voc/o = their art. = the obesity concerns the public interest and States have to limit its spread for two reasons. First, the State has a duty of care to warrant to their citizens. Secondly, m.d the money spend to take care of obese people could be spend in other field of public PP PP plur. policy. Thus, I think imposing a fat tax on junk food based on there fat content could be a good solution.
First of all, even if we can argue that this measure permits to the State to interfere Voc = allows the state with the privacy of citizens, this restriction is justified by the fact that obesity génitif concerned the public health and it has a cost for the State. And, this cost could be tps = présent counterbalanced by the money reaches thanks to this tax. Voc + PP = obtained