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Dear Mrs Cross

I me presented ( quelle langue ? ) , I'm John Williams. I am the parent of Ericka , a child who is in your school but not for (article) long time. I said (présent) that because i desapprove(orhto) (prep) your méthode ( orth) for different reasons. I am myself (article) teacher that's why i enable me to crtitics ( syntaxe) you, because i know the system . I think installing webcams isn't a good idea at all.

Firstly , for children . I think they have the right to have a private life , if you film them every day they can't do one thing [less an adults would be okay] (??) ( je voulais dire : sans qu'un adulte soit d'accord ) . We don't educate robots , the system may enables them to became autonamous. Moreover the webcams increase the cost [to a year] ( je voulais dire : à L'année ) of the school and [every body hasn't got the money to buy useless things ( idée confuse) .
Secondly , i think to (prep) your teachers . I'm a teacher too and [ i will haven't envy ] (??) (Je voulais dire : Je n'aurais pas envie ) to be filmed every day , they have some libeties. Moreover , i, this times ( voc) there is ( pluriel) more and more informatics pirators ( quelle langue ? ) and i don't want to find may photo on ( article) internet. It's the same for children , some spiteful people devert ( quelle langue ?) ( je voulais dire : détourner) this records.

That's why i have decided to change school for my child altough (orth) your school proposes ( article) good enseignment ( french) but i think the liberties of the children and the teachers are essential ans now they aren't respected

Sincerly

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